The important "Thing" to remember is that you are writing an analysis of a major theme in "Economy," so stick to that one theme throughout your paragraph--and keep hammering that theme home on every step of the rubric. If you can trust me, this is the one writing rubric that will serve you well throughout your life as a writer.
Please watch the video and download and use the "Full Rubric," not the basic one. [CLICK HERE TO DOWNLOAD THE RUBRIC] (It is also available on the sidebar) I think I may have jumped the gun by allowing you to use the blank rubric--unless you are absolutely convinced that you "fully" understand each step of the rubric.
My suggestion, since I am gone for the next couple of days, is to form groups with two or three other people to proofread and critique each other's work.
Watch this video and post a comment on something "new" you may have learned. Also: post the names of the people in your group.